Jaliza's poem Sarah Kay

I loved this poem. This is how every parent should be in my opinion, very loving and caring; always there for their child. This poem consisted of postitive and negative things, which show life in a way that I think. The things she said she would do to her daughter shows that she isn't afraid of her growing up, but wants her to do it right; and make the right decisions like her mother. She is a role model for her child, and will try to communicate with her, not on a "mom" level, but something even better for her to feel comfortable as well. Overall I loved this poem, and how Sarah performed it!

Destiny's poem Taylor Mali

I like this poem, and it's because he talks about that people need some more individuality. This is very true, because people are just becoming clones of eachother. He makes it funny which I appreciate because it makes it more enjoyable to laugh. He is very sarcastic, or maybe that is another thing he is trying to show I am not sure, but he uses alliteration and I'm pretty sure he used imagery as well as similies. Overall I enjoyed this poem, but I still know that this guy is an A-hole, so cool poem, not so cool guy.